Hello everyone today I am going to show you my matariki poem, this was pretty easy to make the person but the writing was way easier because we already made the poem on out books. Bye bye I hope you enjoyed this poem bye bye
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, July 7, 2021
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Hi samuel i really like the way you used the shapes and how you gave him a spear with a rabbit in his hand maybe next time you could add a brassy background like hes in a jungle good bye for now from Phoenix
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